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Don't think the part of the fridge is in here but don't know where to write this comment..
(just read the dropbox file. Do i need to write these kinds of comments in the actual document? Because that might get messy..? And since I don't have a great computer, I don't always have acces to inDesign...Problems problems moeilijk moeilijk ;) )

When Bard's packing lunch, are we showing quickly the difference in behavior of brands? coca cola versus a cheaper supermarket brand? (louder shout-out vs whisper or something)
And is he going to ask a product for allergy information?

I need to know what kind of sounds i have to make and what kind of packaging. :)

Are you making a list with things we need but aren't in anyones prep list yet? If there are any other than an alarm clock (that doesn't show numbers) (its sound can be edited after filming)

<--here is where your fridge part will go, I will write a detailed version of the script this week!

hi maartje, i havent written out the detailed parts yet (like your fridge part) exactly because I'm not sure what you want to show. I will write the screenplay according to what you think is important to show and what props you would like to make - so you tell me ;)

I do think it is a good idea to show quickly the difference in behavior of brands, like you said. but if you all could just pinpoint exactly what you want to show and what props you want to make then i can write up the screenplay to suit what you need.

Ok I already wrote some stuff/suggestions on my page (last section)

Home communication system: an integrated phone/voicemail/operating system. Named Robin after the songbird.

These conversations serve to highlight the complicated ways in which voice has become a commodity, with trade laws and guidelines.

this means i'm going to be walking in my underwear, right?

are we going to see the HCS, what does it look like?

yes, thats going to be closing it.

how about combining this with the job? his boss asks him to look back a speech from yesterday or something, as he expects the speech wasn't completely true and he needs to do some research, so he records it.

makes it easier to execute as we can use a laptop (or maybe connect the laptop to a tv (if there's one). But then we know exactly what he's looking at, thats nice for the script and execution

i had the idea to name the glass thing for the silent world Monotira, the greek word for isolator. But i'm doubting how to name the voicebox, as he's talking to it it's probably nice to have a name. But there might be to many names then?

after replaying the fragment, he'll probably ask his navigationsystem if he/she heard that and knows what to do? might be nice, so you know everything is connecting the whole time.

maybe here the second camera is nice, so you can see bard walk away from behind or something?

hahahahah well more like pyjamas but it doesn't really matter, you won't see it right??? XD

we could just use my iPod speakers, it looks a bit like this, but with no clock.

ok good idea to use a laptop, but then do we need to add another voicemail from the boss asking him to look back at the speech? I think that might make it a bit too much. it could just be that the 'breaking news' pops up on his laptop?

Monotira is a great name!! And yes how about we just give the voicebox a brand? like the Apple iVoice or something?? bring it back to something we already know. is this part with the replaying the conversation good? should it be visual (video) or do you think voice is enough?

I've chosen an iPad instead of a laptop because a laptop has a keyboard. Easier to edit and film this way. I also thought the 'lie detector' could be integrated into the ipad - it is also on his voicebox but I think this 'app' could be present on all devices?

Lysanne, does this part work with your audiowatch now? I also thought there could be a poster for the city of rotterdam, that 'heard' him going to the Urban Espresso Bar, and so is advertising to him the cafe's and coffee places of Rotterdam. Let me know if this doesn't work!

haha i donno? caus then we'll need some fancy ass pyjamas which i dont have

yes i agree, thats better

yeah, voice is actually better here. the system in this world is just talking, not really interface. what happens on the voicebox when asking something is not important.

hm i don't really like that idea, as the whole concept is formed around a special device to record and detect lies, not just an app. I spent too much on time the devices already so now i want to use them haha. iPad idea is ok tho, but i though of connecting the laptop to the tv. (no keyboard involved), it was more about easiness to play a video. iPad is possible, then he'll record something from the iPad. Or maybe laying down the voicebox on the iPad to record.

ooooh OK got it! will change it back so that he uses the voicebox!

GREAT! Exactly what i meant :) One part missing though because i forgot to write it on my last page: He has to ask the medication how to use it. (like siri) Medication box will respond the answer. (So he interrupts the constant flow of information coming from the pill box. After the box responds it will pause for a sec only to continue rambling about all its info)